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Chris Abyssus Uchiha
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Subject: Two Things Wed Jun 25, 2008 4:04 am

First off, Regrading NPC, I find that to be unfair, unless at the most its 1, Renjiro for example said he invaded Akatsuki with 30 ANBU and 25 Jounin, that is way out of line, why even have people join the site if we can just make "NPC" I think it should be completely removed unless at times they can use one, like invading Akatsuki he could have one and use two members of the site, thus encouraging people to join the site. I think the current Kages should be tested to Role-Play correctly, and above average, a Kage shouldn't be allowed to have basic Role-Playing levels, they should be top of the line, so they should be tested and if they fail, put them at the level they are suppose to be at. All other ranks seem to have to be that way, but look at some of the people on this site and how their Role-Play looks. Those Two Things Need to Be Addressed, I know it will help make more people come, if we don't do stuff like NPC and don't have bad Role-Players having the Highest of Ranks. -Thanks, Sincerely, Chris.

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Subject: Re: Two Things Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:00 pm

I agree with Chris though i RP properly but yes SOME Kage's RP horribly.

Sojobo
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Sword of Wrath-(Tsurugi Doki no Jutsu)-B Rank
When used, a shining light surrounds one's blade, which becomes pure glowing white as it reflects and amplifies 100% of the light that strikes it. Anything struck by the glowing blade will be burned as though by fire, but it is impossible to extinguish as long as there is light in the area

Body Replacement Technique (Kawarimi no Jutsu)-E Rank
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Jutsu Name: Medical Arts: Healing Jutsu-C Rank
This is just the normal, middle-of-the-road healing jutsu. Any young medical ninja can pull it off. With a handsign, a blue chakra-like substance appears in their hand. From there, the user places it on any normal wound (such as a scrape, small burn, or a cut) and it should stop the bleeding and pain. After a while, the mark disappears.

Jutsu Name: Medical Arts: Great Healing Jutsu-B Rank
This jutsu is a more advanced version of the healing jutsu. With a different handsign, another chakra-like substance appears on the palm. However, this time it's stronger, and can wrap around a wound like a blanket, almost. Wounds as bad as partially -- but not fully -- severed limbs, enormous amounts of bleeding, et cetera can be healed. This jutsu requires a lot of time and a lot of Chakra.

Jutsu Name: Medical Arts: Orb of Protection-C Rank
The Orb of Protection is a staging area for the healing to be done. It is like a barrier, but after created, it doesn't require the creator to continue turning it on. It protects the wounded Shinobi and the medic to do what they wish without interruption during the battle. However, a strong enough jutsu can beat it.

Jutsu Name: Medical Arts: Temportay Paralysis-B Rank
The user does a handsign when working with a patient, thus paralyzing them temporarily instead of having them held down. This makes operations and poison extractions much easier

Fire Release-Great Fireball Jutsu (Katon- Goukakyuu no Jutsu)-C Rank A giant fireball is release from the mouth and controlled by the left index finger and thumb together to form a circle around the mouth.

Fire Release-Fire Dragon Flame Missile (Katon- Karyuu Endan)-B Rank
He will perform the needed Hand Seals then inhale a large amount of chakra into his mouth. He will then release a fire dragon from his mouth to attack his opponent. His is able to control the amount of fire being release and power. A dark red/orange is the normal attack. An added yellow/white to the red/orange is a larger attack.

Fire Release-Dragon Fire Technique(Katon- Ryuuka no Jutsu)-B Rank
He will perform the needed Hand Seals then inhale a large amount of chakra into his mouth. When release, a stray of fire, symbolizing a dragon will appear to strike the opponent. The attack is so powerful that it is able to destroy part of a cliff or mountain.

Fire Release-Hellfire Whirlwind Skill (Katon- Gouka Senpuu no Jutsu)-C Rank
A skill which can be used in order to protect the user. Gathering their chakra into the air and having it spin around them, a flaming whirlwind emerges around the user forming somewhat of a protective barrier. Normally it is used to deter the opponent fromm continuing their taijutsu attack, but can be used offensively to send an opponent whom prefers close range a good distance away because of its spinning force

Fire Release-Fire Prison (Katon- Horou no Jutsu)-C Rank
A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing water from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison

Fire Release-Fire Dragon Napalm (Katon- Karyuu Endan)-B Rank
A skill in which has been considered one of the most powerful streaming fire jutsu. The user gathering up a great deal of chakra within their chest, condensing it and focusing it at the same time. Letting it flow out into the world, bursting forth into a grand stream of flame. This powerful stream having such a flying force that it can repel projectiles that get in its way. This attack flies very fast, and is considered hard to dodge without the use of supplementary jutsu

Fire Release-Pillar of Fire Skill (Katon- Hibashira no Jutsu)-B Rank
A skill in which the user gathers their chakra through the ground, aiming it towards their opponent. If used upon a stationary opponent this jutsu can very easily be used. Shooting up a powerful pillar of flame from the ground which surrounds the opponent. The opponent in side is burned mercilessly during the time they are within it. This jutsu is a self-sustaining jutsu, so even if the attack does not hit it can be used as a tool to throw your opponent at for damage

Fire Release-Fire Clone Skill (Katon- Bunshin no Jutsu)-B Rank
A skill in which creates a tangible clone of flame. With this skill, the tangible clone of flame acts freely and upon its own will. It will attack the opponent as best it can, trying to prompt the opponent to attack it from close range. When the clone is struck, its body turns into its true form being a mass of flame. When the opponent hits this mass of flame, it causes damage along with some terrible burns

Fire Release-Explosive Fire Clone (Katon- Baku Ho Bunshin No Jutsu)-B Rank
A skill where the user gathering their chakra into a Fire Clone, can now make that same clone imbued with an effect that will cause them to explode. Normally the normal fire clone would just burst into flames when struck, this clone explodes outward in a powerful blast of flame

Fire Release-Hell Fire Serpent Skill (Katon- Gouka Dakatsu no Jutsu)-B Rank
A skill which is known as one of the most difficult fire based ninjutsu to learn. The user releases forth a flame from their mouth, as it materializes into a very large snake type shape. The snake has a three foot diamiter and is twenty feet long, and rushes at the opponent. The key danger factor of this jutsu is that, the user can change the direction of the attack at their discretion essentially making it a homing type jutsu

Fire Release-Melting Rain Skill (Katon- Yuutename no Jutsu)-A Rank
A skill in which is one of the most difficult fire based jutsu to master. Within the sky fire chakra is imbued into the clouds from the user. From these clouds, it begins to rain down a series of burning embers. Ecomposing the nearby area or a potentially long range target in a rainfall of fiery embers. This skill can also be dangerous to the user

Fire Release-Seven Heavens (Katon- Nanatsu Kyuuten)-A Rank
A skill in which the user taking their chakra and imbue it with their flame chakra. The user will then spit out the flames toward the opponent, at first taking the form of a large burst but then splitting off into seven distinct fire spears. These spears capable of even breaking through many high level shield jutsu. Each spear is 10 feet in length

Fire Release-Focus Flame Shot (Katon- Shorten Kane Tamar no Jutsu)-B Rank
A skill in which, has the key ability for one to focus their chakra to the level of B rank. Performing the first hand seal, and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of leveling an entire house

Earth Release-Mud Bullet Spray (Doton- Deidotama Himatsu no Jutsu]-B Rank
A technique where the user gathers their earth chakra within their mouth and covert it to mud. This mud compressing together and becoming hard and compact. The user then sprays the bullets made of mud from their mouth towards the opponent. Being such a large spray having a shotgun type of effect, and is a very hard jutsu to evade

Earth Release-Mud Capture Net (Doton- Deido Nottori Bou no Jutsu)-D Rank
A skill in which can be shot from the mouth, sending for a net created from earth. This net spreads out a great deal and when latching onto the opponent sticks to not only them but any other object it touches. Tangling them up.

Earth Release-Earth Bunshin Skill (Doton- Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu)-C Rank
A skill in which creates a tangible clone of the user, having only one real strong quality about it. When the opponent strikes this bunshin, twenty percent of the damage done to it through physical damage is done back to the opponent.

Earth Release-Earth Land Deflection (Doton- Doroku Gaeshi)-C Rank
A skill where the user slams there hands onto the ground, flipping up an area of earth that is able to protect their body from oncoming attacks. Capable of deflecting metallic objects and various jutsu

Earth Release-Earth Dragon Barrage (Doton- Doryuudan no Jutsu)-C Rank
Emerging from the ground comes a dragons head made of earth, spewing forth balls of mud in which can be made flammable with the use of fire jutsu.

Earth Release-Quicksand Skill (Doton- Hakabashi Suna no Jutsu)-C Rank
A skill where chakra is sent through the ground, as it is difused it weakens the ground below the opponent. Creating a sinking whirlpool of sand to pull down the opponent into the ground. Enabling the user to use another jutsu during this hectic state

Earth Release-Earth Golen Summoning (Doton- Tsuchi Gugen Kuchiyose no Jutsu)-C Rank
A technique which summons a golem made of pure clay. The golem having twenty five percent more then the users current stamina, but having a fifth of all their stats. The golem can absorb lightning jutsu, and can have its body form into spikes and clubs to attack the opponent. The golem is very bunshin like, however has significantly downsized intelligence and shows an incredible destructive behavior

Earth Release-Golem Explosion (Doton- Gugen Baku no Jutsu)-B Rank
A technique which is utilizing after the Earth Golem Summoning Skill. The user can begin to channel chakra through their golem as it approaches there opponent. When it is within a tangled up situation with the opponent, it can make a large explosion from within the golem. Sending up a debris of rocks and dust to otherwise blind and perhaps even crush the opponent. The radius that is covered in rocks will be around 10 feet from the golem

Earth Release-Earth Barrier Prison (Doton- Kekkai Doroudoumu)-B Rank
A skill which the user users the surrounding earth in order to capture them within a prison. The prison is infused with chakra, so that when it it attacked the chakra instantly begins to repair the earth through materialization. Within the dome, all chakra used becomes unfocused. Making pure chakra techniques, and the ability to create other elements useless.

Earth Release-Earth Grip Skill (Doton- Tsuchi Nigiri no Jutsu)-B Rank
A technique where the user gathers chakra into the ground, causing a hand to arise and grip at the opponent. The arms can go out normally approximately two feet. Once grapping onto the opponent the arm stiffens to immobilize the opponent.

Earth Release-Mud Bubble (Doton- Deido Suihou no Jutsu)-B Rank
A technique where the user brings up a sphere shaped prison around their opponent, encasing them within a prison of mud. The mud being so thick the opponent cannot even see through it. If left in there long enough, one could end up suffocating with the lack of oxygen. This prison must be contained with hand contact on the bubble, and once the hand is removed from the bubble the jutsu can be instantly broken free from within

Earth Release-Underworld Swamp (Doton- Yomi Numa)-A Rank
A technique where the user channels their chakra into the ground, changing the state of the ground from a normal earth to a swampy area. This happening all simultaneously as the chakra is difused and breaks apart the ground into its new swamp form. In this form, the swamp if very sticky and slipper, and can trap an opponent very easily and can cause an opponent to sink down into the ground and drown in the swamp if not careful

Earth Release-Graveyard Soil (Doton- Hakachi Dojou no Jutsu)-A Rank
A technique considered the beefed up version of the Earth Grip Skill. Grabbing at the opponent and bringing them down and pinning them to the ground. These hands can extend very far, and entirely made of clay. The strength of the hands is equal to one fourth of the users total strength, with each additional hand that amount goes up and makes the force to break free greater.

Black Hand Skill (Kurote no Jutsu)-B Rank
A technique where the user can transmit a special poison through an open wound. This jutsu is normally used close range, where the user shoves their hand forward and placed it upon an opponents wound. Depending on how far the wound is from the hands, will change how long it takes for the effect to take place [the closer it is, the faster it happens] The opponents hands will turn black and become stiff and unable to perform handseals

The Plague Skill (Soeki no Jutsu)-A Rank
A technique which is a very deadly dokuton skill which can render even the strongest shinobi with an extreme pain. By infusing highly concentrated poison into one part of the persons body through the pores it begins to spread causing purple dots to appear all over the body. As they spread over the body, they constantly cause more and more pain as time goes on.

Poison Hydra Barrage Skill (Doku Hebi Rendan no Jutsu)-A Rank
A technique, where the user breathes forth a great hydra created of poison. This solid incarnation of poison will then be sent off towards the opponent. Letting forth great bursts of poison which cause no damage, but when inhaled will slowly begin to paralyze the body. Each breath decreases the amount of posts it takes to fully paralyze by 2. The technique ends with the hydra smashing into the ground, letting off a great deal of the same deadly poison

Magma release-Magma clone skill (Magumaton - Maguma Bunshin no Jutsu)-A Rank
Effect: A technique where a clone is created out of magma, in which can fire off a stream of magma from its arms not to exceed the volume of the clone. A taijutsu shinobi's worst type of clone to go up against

Magma Release · Magma Protection (Magumaton - Maguma Engo No Jutsu)-A Rank
A technique that is used to protect the user. Magma flies up from the ground and floats around the user. If the opponent attacks the magma, that will hurt a great deal. But over time the magma will harden and become rock, and fall to the ground.


Magma Release · Magma Prison (Magumaton - Maguma Hitoya No Jutsu)-B Rank
The user performs various hand seals as they charge chakra deep into the ground. Those handseals are dragon, serpent, tiger, ox, serpent/dragon hybrid, tiger/ox hybrid, finished with pressing the palms of the hands against the ground. Magma erupts from the ground as it surges creating a large dome either around just the opponent of both the opponent and the user. Within the prison is it very hot until the magma cools. When the magma cools it is very hard to break, and is almost an unescapable prison

Magma Release - Lava Burst (Magumaton - Kazangan Heki)-B Rank
The user performing the necessary handseals take in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Upon exhaling, a burst of condensed lava emerges and is fired off at the opponent. Upon striking a surface it explodes into many droplets of lava.

Astral Projection Skill (Kozumikku Jigyou no Jutsu)
A technique that is used to send an astral projection of the user to another place they have been to before, the astral projection can lend chakra however cannot physically fight and is used for long distance communication


He also has a great knowledge of medical jutsu, surgeries and experimental surgeries, most of which he created. These include DNA and genetic manipulation to do anything from gaining Kekkai Genkai to changing muscle mass to increase speed and strength.


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Name: Izanagi

Title: God of Creation

Description:This sole being was the very source that generated all that has become the world. Manifesting all other gods in order to split up various tedious tasks in which he did not wish to be associated with.

Powers: The power of the God of Creation is virtually limitless, however working on the ideas of equivalent exchange. Allowing you to create virtually anything at the cost of chakra or a sacrifice.

Name: Shinigami

Title: God of Death

Description: The god that is the physical manifestation of death. Taking in all souls that have been destroyed for whatever reasons. Taking the evil and impure souls, digesting them within in order to purify them for the process of reincarnation.

Powers: The power of the God of Death is truly a terrifying one. Boasting the ability to perform any type of sealing type technique in existence. Even able to generate sealing techniques perfect for the users current situation. However, such a power comes at a high price. Using his power causes the user to fall into a coma and possibly die

Name: Amaterasu

Title: God of the Sun

Description: Born from the left eye of the Izanagi, one of the three children which are believed to held a combined power equal to that of the Izanagi. Being the god that has been known for the emission of all light within the world. Having a very warm heart and great compassion for mankind despite his appearance.

Powers: Upon summoning Amaterasu the summoner can burn anything he/she looks at with an instant. This requires a great deal of chakra and a sacrifice to the goddess once every year or she will no longer come when summoned.

Name: Tsukuyomi

Title: God of the Moon

Description: Born from the right eye of the Izanagi, one of the three children which are believed to held a combined power equal to that of the Izanagi. Being the god that is often pictured as the direct opposite of the Amaterasu. Being a cold hearted being with no compassion for mankind.

Powers: A blood sacrifice is required after every summoning. However, this god has the power of an unbreakable Genjutsu. The victim falls into the genjutsu when looking upon Tsukuyomi himself and their mind feels as though it is trapped for a total of one year of constant pain that is in reality only a few seconds. If the victim is strong enough they can survive this but it would take at least a full year to recover completely.

Name: Susanoo

Title: God of the Sea and Storms

Description: Born from the nose of the Izanagi, one of the three children which are believed to held a combined power equal to that of the Izanagi. A god that has been dispelled from the heavens for his cruelty towards his sister Amaterasu. Has been known to be a creature that continues to generate powerful storms.

Powers: When summoned Susanoo conjures up a great storm bring down tornadoes and bolts of lightning from the sky to attack his enemies. Susanoo requires the summoner to follow out one order for each time he is summoned and enjoys making them do things such as torture their own family members. 

Name: Miroka

Title: God of Incarnation

Description:The god that has been associated with the power of incarnation. Giving the power of animation to all types of creatures that have no ways of movement before its blessing.

Powers: When summoned Miroka will raise the dead to fight for his summoner. He is not very intelligent and is easy to control;, requiring no sacrifice. He does however, take a lot of chakra to summon.

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Subject: Re: Two Things Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:04 pm

The NPC rule is in effect mainly because I count any shadow clone as an NPC so you can control them to some extent and so people can't just make 500 shadow clones and God Mod with them. I will be doing the Hokage contest for all the kages to be sure that all of the kages are the best people for the job

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Subject: Re: Two Things Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:57 am

Oooh.

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