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PostSubject: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 12:13 am

Name: gengi

Age: 36

Gender: Male

Village: konoha

Ninja Rank: medical ninja-ANBU

Clan: n/a

Looks:white jacket,white pants with 1 red stripe,headband around waste

Personality: serious,hard to agree with,

Special Characteristics: medical abilitys-flute player

Elements: wind,lighting

Skills/Specialties: mediacal,ninjutsu,genjutsu

jutsu:

Name: medical lock
Effect: this jutsu is used to keep patients still it shuts down all there muscles making movement impossiable
Element: N/A
Rank : B

Name: muscle tear
Effect: a big or small burst of wind is shot and cuts any bodys muscles when the wind hits them
Element:wind
Rank : C

Name: sweet dream
Effect: feathers are sent every were and when a feather goes over or near opponet or person they fall asleep
Element:N/A
Rank : C

Name: poison injection
Effect: gengi puts his hands together and they turn into a needle then he spins and stabs opponet injecting them with poison
Element:N/A
Rank : C

Name: healing jutsu
Effect: gengi can heal himself or any allies
Element:N/A
Rank :C

Name: deattach
Effect: gengi hits opponet in a joint and deatachs it form opponets body
Element:N/A
Rank : C

Name: tender touch
Effect: gengis hands get coverd in chackra then any hits/touches to any1 cuts there joints tendentds,muscles,chackra points etc.
Element:N/A
Rank : B

Name: illinfect
Effect: gengi strikes opponet abnd they get deathly sick to were they can't move quickly or use jutsus
Element:N/A
Rank : C

Name: chackra seal
Effect: gengis fingers get coverd in chackra and he strikes opponet cutting off all chackra use for 10 attacking posts
Element:N/A
Rank : B

Name: blood shot
Effect: genji strikes opponet and then there blood starts going 10 times the speed causing there skin to bleed and breathing hard
Element:N/A
Rank : B

Name: shock of life/death
Effect: gengis hands get coverd in static and he shocks opponet/patient restarting or shuting down there heart
Element:lighting
Rank : C

Name: implude
Effect: gengi strikes opponet and all blood goes to were they were struck causing that body part to fill up with blood and if the jutsu is kept long enough that body part explodes
Element:N/A
Rank : B

Name: chemical imput
Effect: chemiclas drip down gengis arms and he can shot deadly/poison chemicals at opponet
Element:N/A
Rank : C

Name: thosannd years of pain
Effect: gengi dissapears and reappears behind opponet sticking his fingers in there but causing them to go flying trew the air and causing much pain
Element:N/A
Rank : C


Name: itchy fog
Effect: a fog of itching powder is spread and makes opponet itch uncontrollably
Element:N/A
Rank : C


Name: abkhint
Effect: chackra covers genjis arm and his strikes are way faster then human speed and every hit takes away chackra and blood flow to the spt that was hit
Element:N/A
Rank : C


Name: summing jutsu-medical monkey
Effect: gengi draws blood and summins a small monkey that can heal wounds or injurys
Element:N/A
Rank : B


Name: summing jutsu-medical monkey king
Effect: gengi draws blood and summins a giant monkey that can poison,kill,hurt,give fatal dieases to,injure,or heal most injurys
Element:N/A
Rank : B


Name: "War of Evil Men"
Type: Ninjutsu, B-rank, Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Users: Tayuya
One of the melodies gengi plays on her demon flute. It causes anyone to hear it to be entranced in the Mateki: Mugen'onsa (Demonic Flute: Dream Sound Chain) Genjutsu


Name: "Demonic Flute: Dream Sound Chain"
Type: Genjutsu, B-rank, Supplementary, All ranges
Users: Tayuya
The recipient will feel like they are tied with numerous wires, restricting their movement. Then, their flesh will begin to melt away from their bones, causing great pain and horror to the person receiving the jutsu. The user must be playing the flute the entire time the Jutsu is being used.

name:summing jutsu-doki
effect:gengi draws blodd and plays a note summing 3 demons known as the doki
element:N/A
rank:B


name:doki chackra eaters
effect:all the doki stop and open there mouths and demon ghost slip out and eat at opponets chackra
element:N/A
rank:C



Summoning
Jutsu (Lightning Beetles): Summons around 50 beetles that shock on
contact and die once they touch anything. Mainly a Confusion technique
this Jutsu does barely any damage and costs little chakra. This wil
burn through clothing and leave minor burns but no more. They arnt fast
beetles either such that they could be outrun by many.

Flash Barrage
Rank- C (Ninjutsu)
The user creates two clones of himself, then they continususly jump
around the enemy punching or slicing them with their blades giving them
the sense that his moving at extreme speed and is unstoppable, but this
jutsu can be easily canceled with someone relating to byakugan or
sharingan by simply knocking them down before they attack.

Clone Fade
Rank- D (Genjutsu)
The
user creates a clone of himself, then using genjutsu makes it look like
their fading away so as the Tracker or chaser is coming after him the
clone will be caught making an easy escape for the person, this can be
used to easily escape someone who is tracking them, can be taught and
takes little to no chakra.

Thunder Foot/Fist:
Rank C
All feet/fist movement
increase by 16% making easier to do kicks/punches and such, and if the
enemy is hit with the jutsu it will shock them since his feet/fists are
charged with Lightning.

Thunder Armour:
Rank C
The users body becomes
engulfed in lightning chakra protecting him from most non-water
attacks, this causes much slower movement, if weapons such as kunai or
Shuriken are thrown into it they are pointed outwards to make a more
vositile attack.

Lightning Dragon Jutsu:
Rank B
The user fires a dragon
shaped lightning missile at the enemy which he can control with hand
movements making it much like a homing missile, causing tremendous
damage.

Lightning Blast Technique: The user fires 3
large balls of lightning from his mouth that will smash everything in
its path reaching out about 50 meters, however the further they go the
smaller they get.

Eternal Chaos

Rank B

Discription
Attacks
the oppenent with Super Sonic noise levels, to anyone withen the
alotted area, [10m by 10m] but if he uses a lot more chakra he can
increase the distance of the Sonic Attack. If kept in this Sonic field
for too long, the eardrums will shatter causing the loss of hearing,
[Lets say 5 posts.] By focusing chakra around his ears the sonic attack
doesnt do damage to Darijiro. If kept in longer, then your body will
black out [5 more posts].


Name: "Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment"
Type: B-rank, Supplementary, Mid-range (5-10m)
Users: Sound Four
This jutsu creates a box-like barrier around an area defined by the four users of it. Anything that touches with barrier will burst into purple flame. As long as the users of the jutsu remain active and unharmed, this barrier can never be broken.

name:demon flute illusion-thousand warriors
effect:gengi plays a song and whoever heres it gets put in an illusion were thousands of stone warriors are around opponet and attack them while in the real world there ears start to bleed
element:N/A
rank:C

name:demon flute illusion-body blood
effect:gengi plays his flute and who ever hears it is put in an illusion were there body falls apart and keeps tearing into smaller pieces were in the real world tere ears start to bleed and there skin starts to cut
element:N/A
rank:C

name:demon flute blade
effect:two blades come out from each side of the flute
element:N/A
rank:N/A

name:lighting strike
effect:a burst of lighting is either shot from fingers or the sky at opponet
element:lighting
rank:C

name:lighting hurrican
effect:gengi does a leaf hurricane but charges lighting on his foot to shock opponet if hit
element:lighting
rank:C

name:sonic song
effect:gengi plays his flute and very loud causing every one close to bleed in there ears
element:N/A
rank:C


name:sonic boom
effect:genig plays his flute and every time he plays a sertain note the sound waves explode
element:N/A
rank:B

name:chackra song
effect:gengi plays a song and any one that hears the song loses chackra
element:N/A
rank:B

name:ear drums of gold
effect:gengi always has these on---he puts in ear plugs that mold to your ear drums making effects of the flute not work
element:N/A
rank:N/A

name:lighting blade
effect:a ball of lighting is formed in hand that can cut lighting in half and also ppl((kakashis jutsu))
element:lighting
rank:B

name:song of disspaer
effect:gengi plays a great song that stops opponet from attacking then he plays a wrong note and make everyone that heard it get blasted and makes there hearing gone
element:N/A
rank:C

name:medical tone
effect:gengi plays a song that heals alliaes
element:N/A
rank:C

name:black song
effect:gengi plays an evil song that makes everything black so lightis dim and everything that is black can be destroyed by a simple note
element:N/A
rank:B

name:summing jutsu-slug
effect:gengi draws blood and summins the medical slug((tsunadais jutsu))
element:N/A
rank:B

name:rasengon
effect:a sphere made of chackra is made in hand and when opponet is hit they arn't sent flying with there insides twssted((narutos jutsu))
element:N/A
rank:S

name:chidori nagashi
effect:a full body lighting blade aka. chidori.that cans opponet when touched bye this lighting
element:lighting
rank:S

name:raiging song
effect:gengi plays his flute and the sound waves boom causing everything in the area to explode and bleed if human
element:N/A
rank:B








history/backround:Gengis skill of healing abiltiys qas noticed quickly.The hokage took him in and let him live in his village.He learned how to heal from his mom.His mom passed away from a fatal diesase.Gengi was the worst medical ninja in his family so they never took hm on mission to heal people.Most of his life he stayed in huis basement practcing ntill he needed medical attention.when he was around 16 he made some progress.He was able to heal the former hokage from the same diesase his mom had.When he escaped from his house he was a missing ninja till the age of 27.Then he was found bye the hokage who later gengi became one of the best ninja in the wind village.He is close to the rank of appreantice so he trains even harder the all the others.His dream is to one day become hokage and he watches closely so he can acive his dream.that dream was put aside when he broke out of his house.He took flute playing lessons and was pretty good at it.He always played but hated it.One day he thought to himself ''wat wold happen if i were to insert chackra into wat i play''.He did this and made many illusions and explosions.He then started to play more and perfect his jutsu then he was found by the hokage.((thats were the story takes place))




RP SAMPLE:gengi wipes off the blood from his mouth and stands pointing his finger then he says''your nto leaving with your life''as his hands glow a dark blue and he chages at opponet with heavy rain pring down so sight was limited.Gengi then jumped and said''tender touch''as the chackra grew over his arm and he punched ???? in the face and takeing chackra.Then gengi sees that he is destroyed and licks off the blood of ???? from his nucleas.Then the rain stopped and he looked up and said "thank you"as the clouds cleard but rain still fell


Last edited by gengi on Sun Jun 29, 2008 11:36 am; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : edting jutsu)
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Posts : 23
Join date : 2008-06-23
Age : 31
Location : Missing-nin

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jutsu's list:
chakra:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue0/0gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
blood:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue0/0gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)

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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 2:29 am

Your high rank jutsu to low rank jutsu ratio completely outweigh eachother. There's no balance whatsoever deeming this disapproved. Please alter your jutsu list and abilities to better suit your character's limitations. Also, the character template requires a roleplay sample, too.
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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 2:39 am

k i fixed them..i think>?
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Sasuke-kun.-- xx
Missing Ninja
Missing Ninja
Sasuke-kun.-- xx


Posts : 23
Join date : 2008-06-23
Age : 31
Location : Missing-nin

ninja info
jutsu's list:
chakra:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue0/0gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
blood:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue0/0gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)

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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 2:52 am

I'm unclear with what you've altered in your approval form.

- Firstly, you have not posted your character's special characteristics; 'what makes them unique?'

- Second, the jutsus and Kuchiyose techniques(summoning) should be seperated into two different categories, as mentioned in the character template.

- Any elements you possess should also be posted, if not, put "n/a" next to it.

- You still have not changed your list of jutsu whatsoever which contains way too many high ranked jutsu. It needs to be limited to a few; not so abundant that your character looks overpowered.

- A roleplay sample is also required within the approval form.

If there's anything you're unclear about, you can consult the character template topic Sojobo has posted in the Character Approval thread.
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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 11:06 am

k i fixed it
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Join date : 2008-06-21
Age : 34

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chakra:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue100000000/100000000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (100000000/100000000)
blood:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue100000000/100000000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (100000000/100000000)

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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 11:32 am

you keep saying you fixed it without changing anything. You still need to have fewer high rank jutsu and you still need a role play sample.
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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySat Jun 28, 2008 11:53 pm

alrigt i fixed everything
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Join date : 2008-06-21

ninja info
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chakra:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue100000/100000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
blood:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue10000000/10000000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (10000000/10000000)

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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySun Jun 29, 2008 11:05 am

You still have a lot of high ranked jutsus and Rasengan is S ranked and Chidori Nagashi is too.
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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySun Jun 29, 2008 11:12 am

well if i want to be strong i want to have good jutsu alright if i lower the ranks thne am i approved?
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chakra:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue100000/100000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
blood:
gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Left_bar_bleue10000000/10000000gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU Empty_bar_bleue  (10000000/10000000)

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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySun Jun 29, 2008 11:38 am

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU   gengi kumi medical ninjaANBU EmptySun Jun 29, 2008 11:38 am

thx
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